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Vill is a young man living in a cottage in the Old Hills. He leads a normal life. But when a message arrives for him from the city, he must decide between a normal life and a life of greatness.
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Chapter 3
Chapter 3 is finally out! Enjoy!
Chapter 3:
The Tournament
Vill woke early the next morning,
because he wanted to get ready for the tournament. He did not milk the cows
today, nor tie them up in the field; for he knew that, if he won the
tournament, there would be no cows involved.
Vill had decided to take to the
tournament grounds early, so that he could hear the rules and know what to do,
and what ‘not’ to do. Vill’s mother would most likely come, but Vill would need
to say goodbye sooner than when (if) he was taken away.
“Vill?” said his mother. “What are you
doin’ up?”
“For what reason do you suppose?”
replied Vill. “I am getting an early start to go to the tournament.”
“You were planning to attend the
tournament?”
“Yes, I made my decision last night.”
“But your fever…”
“…has gone completely. Even if it
wasn’t, I would still go.”
“But, what about the cows Vill, what
about the cheese; what about, me?”
“I’ve arranged for that. You know the
soldier who gave us the message? Well, while I was in town yesterday, I saw
him. I asked how he was, and all the niceties of the day; then I asked him if
he would be willing to guard the cottage that I lived in, as I will no longer
live there.
“He agreed, and I was able to sell him
some cheese. Also: he is to be a guard at the tournament; if I am taken to the
Warriors’ Guild, then he will find you in the seats, and escort you to here;
that is, if you attend the tournament. What say you?” Vill’s mother was
speechless; she couldn’t believe that Vill had arranged for all of this in one
meeting.
“Well,” she started, “I do not want you
to leave. But all the same, this is your dream, and you must make it come true.
Yes, I will come with you, and will handle the outcome however needed.
This was a large surprise for Vill; not
just because she said she would come, but because she was not planning for
either of them to attend. Vill embraced his mother, towering a head taller than
her. He then said, “I must leave now, and quickly; are you ready?”
“Well, I suppose it matters not, if we
must leave this instant,” she replied.
Quickly, Vill grabbed his petition, and
was out the back door that was the only door between the barn and the cottage.
He quickly walked through the barn doors, and hitched up the donkey. Vill
carefully and quickly placed and tied the yolk; then he helped his mother onto
the bench where the driver sat. Vill took up the reins, gave them a good whip,
and held them firm as the donkey trotted off to the next hill.
The cart could be seen coming over the
west horizon; it was coming quicker by the minute, the donkey now trotting as
fast as possible. Vill and his mother seemed to be bouncing up and down on the
bench as the cart moved down the stone path.
“We should be there soon!” announced
Vill, trying to make his voice louder than the rolling wheels and pounding
hooves. They indeed were close; the wagon was climbing the final hill that was
part of the Old Hills, and soon, they would see the tournament grounds. Vill
had been there a few times, mainly for inter-kingdom events. Most were melee battles,
using plaster swords and wooden shields, but some, were archery contests, where
the rules were obvious. On rare occasions though, there were all- around
tournaments, where you had to prove your skills on an obstacle course with
diverse challenges. This was something Vill hoped he didn’t have to compete in.
They were now coming over the tip of the
hill, and could see two things: the stone towers and walls of Cath-Lenor, and
the open stands and flags of the Cath-Lenor tournament grounds. They had both been
made with great skill, and were now some of the greatest places known in the
world.
The path came to a fork, so Vill turned
right, just ever so slightly north-east; this way led to the tournament grounds
just north of Cath-Lenor.
The sun was beginning to sneak out from
behind Mt. Azleworth as Vill quickly looked back. He was not sure if they would
get there on time, or if they would just have to spectate. Vill tried not to
think of any of these things, and erased them from his memory. He then wondered
why he had thought these things, because they were now just outside the
grounds. A huge square stuck out of the ground like giant bowl. Vill saw
hundreds of wagons, carts, horses and donkeys on the field just outside the
entrance, and saw people gathered everywhere. They were waiting for permission
to enter, since they were only spectators; but Vill needed to get to the front.
He tied up the donkey, and was greeted by his old friends and neighbors. He
then looked to his mother, who was in tears, and embraced her.
“I will always be with you mother,” he
said over the deafening noise. He then waved goodbye, and left her there,
looking so frail and hopeless.
Vill made his way through the crowd as
quickly as he could; it was difficult; one because it was a packed crowd, and
two because all his mother’s friends came to him with open arms and a smile
with bad breath. Vill though, despite all the difficulties, managed to get to the
other side of the crowd. There were still a couple people there, but over half
were guards, who only talked when needed and stayed at their post. Vill
recognized a certain guard with a yellow beard; of course, Vill didn’t greet
him, since he was on duty. He approached him, and gave him his scroll; the man
looked at it, and gave it back saying, “You may pass in to the arena, where you
will find two guards standing; they will guide you to the training room, where
the rules will be explained.” Vill thanked him with a hint of a smile, and
entered the open gate; behind was a large field covered in sand. It was around
seventy-five yards long, and forty yards wide. On its sides were huge wooden
stands, at least thirty rows up, and at the ends, were large wooden walls with
large and small targets.
And in the middle of the field were two
guards were standing, just like the yellow bearded guard had said. His heart
pumped furiously as he walked up to them.
“I am here to be escorted to the
training room,” said Vill.
“And what be your name?” questioned the
guard on the right.
“Vill Rosen.”
“And your age?”
“Nineteen; twenty in two days.” At this
the guard pulled out an old scroll and examined it carefully. He then nodded as
he tapped the paper twice.
“Vill Rosen,” he said, “nearly twenty;
invited to the “Warriors’ Tournament. Follow me.” The guard led him across the
field and into a door that was in the wall in front of the stands. He opened
it, and let Vill enter alone.
Inside were many men of his age, and the
number of men there around was fifteen. Some he knew, some he’d seen, and some
he’d never heard of or seen. The ones’ he knew greeted him vigorously, and the
ones’ who didn’t shyly introduced themselves or one another. They were all
dressed in peasant’s clothes, save a few, who lived in Cath-Lenor, and whose
parents’ were nobles. These young men though, were not arrogant or rude, (like
many of the other nobles.) Instead they were kind and warm, and very energetic.
Many of the men talked and predicted who
the winner would be. Some boasted of the moves that they would execute during
the matches, while others were so confident that they would win, that they said
of the great deeds that they would do while they were a warrior.
Vill shared no opinion in these conversations, though some of the others urged him to. Vill was shy, and was not interested in conversation; he was readying his mind for the tournament matches. It would be time soon, and he would need to be ready.
Vill shared no opinion in these conversations, though some of the others urged him to. Vill was shy, and was not interested in conversation; he was readying his mind for the tournament matches. It would be time soon, and he would need to be ready.
He was beginning to hear some chatter;
not from the room, but right above him, in the stands. The chatter slowly
turned into a roar, as more people seemed to join by the thousands. The
spectators must be finding their seats. Just then, a guard entered; he was
holding a large sack. As soon as he entered he said, “I hope you all are faring
well, so it may trouble you that I am here to explain the rules and invite the
first two contenders.” The chatter ceased as the guard addressed them all. “The
rules are simple,” continued the guard. “Each of you will be given this
equipment before you enter.” He then pulled out from his bag two pairs of thick
leather shirts and leggings, two pairs of leather gloves, and two good helmets.
Some of the men snorted at the sight of them, while others stayed silent, with
maybe hint of a grin. The guard continued, and pulled out two wooden swords,
and from his arm, he pulled off two wooden shields. He then explained the
rules: “Two of you will go out to start the first match; you will then wait for
my command. Once my command is given, you must fight each other. You will fight
until one of you gives up; you may do so by saying the word, “respite”. After
that, you are out of the tournament. You may return here until the tournament
ends. If you win, then you may return here until your name is called. We will
narrow the number of you men down to two, and those two will fight.
“Joseph Becker and Harold Marcus? Would
you two please put on the equipment? When done, follow me.” The two did exactly
as addressed, and followed the guard out to the arena.
Everyone in the room was excited. Some
started predicting who would win this first match. Some were quiet and did not
babble about the whole thing. All hopped up onto the stone bench where they
could spectate by looking out the windows. The room they were in was beneath
the stands; there was a small wall between two of the seating rows. In this
wall were windows, where the tournament contenders could watch the matches
while they awaited their own.
The first match went well: Harold Marcus
was down on the ground, and Joseph Becker was about to jump on him. Harold then
rolled away at the last minute, and pounced on Joseph. Joseph finally gave up,
after a few seconds, making Harold the victor.
Just then the door opened and two more
names were called: “Elarkin Stroner and Irana Maski!” The two men with those
titles exchanged glances and hopped down from the bench. They then slowly put
on the equipment that was thrown into the room while the guard announced their
names. Just then the door opened, and two men came in: Harold Marcus and Joseph
Becker. They were good friends, and they came in with their arms around each
other’s shoulders. They both had a faint smile on their faces, even though only
one of them had emerged victorious.
The other two, (Elarkin and Irana) had
entered the sand arena. Everyone stood on the ledge and watched: Elarkin had
the lower hand, since he was slightly taller and his legs were not very strong.
Irana though, did have a good chance, because he was short and stout, and could
stay upright much easier. Irana’s first move was a roll at Elarkin’s feet.
Elarkin jumped and avoided it, and tried to jump on Irana; this failed however,
because Irana had jumped up, once he had realized that his own move had failed.
The two now standing showed remarkable sword fighting skills, making it hard
for the other contenders to see out the window because the spectators were
standing in their excitement; it was impossible to figure out who had won the
match.
Just then, the door opened; everyone
looked over to see Elarkin and Irana walking in to together. Both of them were
breathless, but even so, they were they laughing.
“Who won?!” was the question that was
asked; they all crowded around the two and waited for their answer.
“Well,” began Elarkin, “I did! But it
was an even battle, for Irana had me down on my back twice!” The others cheered
so loudly, that they hardly heard the guard throw in the equipment and shout:
“Hugo Maine and Vill Rosen!” Vill’s heart stopped in its tracks; everyone’s
voices dropped slightly, but to Vill, all noise went away. He and Hugo exchanged
glances, and then slowly made their way to the pile of equipment. Vill put it
on piece by piece, and took up the sword and shield; he was ready, and so was Hugo.
The guard led them out onto the sand arena; straight ahead, sat the three
Warriors on large wooden chairs. Their names were: “Sir Loylen”, the lead
warrior, “Sir Maron”, the second in command, and “Sir Stolar”, the third in
command.
The guard suddenly stopped near the
middle and said: “Here we have two contenders: Hugo Maine, from the Old Hills…”
he stopped as the crowd cheered, “And Vill Rosen, also from the Old Hills.” The
crowd cheered some more. Just then, while Vill was scanning the crowd, he saw a
familiar face: his mother’s. He was reminded of his choice, (which did not make
him feel better.) He gave her a faint smile, and then readied himself for the
match until the guard said, (addressing Vill and Hugo,) “Let the match, begin!”
The guard then moved aside to the outer wall, as to not get in the way.
Vill and Hugo rounded each other slowly;
neither of them made any move. Suddenly, Hugo came at Vill with a swing of his
sword; Vill blocked it just on time with his shield. Many well placed swings
came at Vill. Vill though, did not take the offensive side. Many more blows
came at him, one knocking him to the ground. Hugo swung his sword down, and
Vill, deflected it with his shield. Another blow came, and this time Vill
rolled to the side at the last minute. He got up while rolling, and stood a few
yards away from Hugo; his memory brought him back to the night before the last.
He remembered splitting the wood in two, after trying two times before. The
mechanics came back to his arms, (though he could only use his right, since his
shield was in his left,) and he aimed a precise blow to the Hugo’s helm as Hugo
charged him; Hugo blocked with the top of his shield, just barely in time. This
stopped Hugo completely, nearly making him fall down. Before he could recover,
Vill dealt another blow, this time, to Hugo’s left side; he blocked with his
sword, and then dealt a blow dangerously close to Vill’s chest. Vill deflects
it with his shield; Vill then had an interesting idea: after blocking two more
blows, he swung his sword at Hugo’s helmet; and just like Vill had planned,
Hugo used his shield to block. At the moment Hugo put up his shield, Vill
charges him with his shield and aimed for Hugo’s exposed chest; his plan
worked, and Hugo was on the ground, struggling to stand up. He had dropped his
sword and shield during Vill’s move, and had no chance to get them. He tried
getting up using brute strength: he tried to push Vill off. That didn’t work,
so he tried to roll to one side, and then suddenly change direction; this did
not succeed either. Finally, after some more struggling, he uttered the word,
“Respite!” Vill immediately rose, and helped Hugo up. Hugo accepted this kind
act, and he and Vill returned to the training room.
Everyone was clapping, and the arm that
was clenching Vill’s heart, had now retreated. They took off the equipment and
handed it to the guard before entering the room. Vill then opened the door and
was greeted by the other men. They said things like “Good match!” and “Great
job.” Vill was sweaty and tired, and hoped for a good long rest.
He then saw two doors side by side in
the back of the room that he had not seen before; it said ‘Potion Room’. Vill’s
curiosity was raised.
He then heard the guard yell, “Jeffery
Goalen and Horace Strow!” Vill ran over to the guard and quietly asked, “What
is behind those doors?”
“Well,” began the guard, “If anyone is
wounded during any kind of tournament, then they’ll be taken into there, where
they will be treated to some potions. During this warrior tournament though, we
use it as a room to lay down in when one group of contenders is done fighting
during the first round. I’m going to send you there after this match; I need to
go!” The guard ran out to join the two men in the match. Vill retreated to the
stone bench to watch the match; the guard was announcing the names. He then
heard: “Let the match begin!”
Vill thoughts though were not on the
match; his mind was wandering through what was going to happen during the third
round, when he would have his second match. Who his opponent would be would be
unsure until the winner emerged from this current match. The winner would be
Vill’s opponent.
Just then a shout went up from the
crowd, and cheering started. The door opened, and the guard said, “Those who’ve
haven’t been in a match yet say ‘I’.”
“I,” said the ones who had been
addressed.
“Then you stay here,” said the guard.
“Those who have won their matches, follow me. Those who lost theirs, I’ll be
back for you once I settle these ones down.” He then gestured to the ones that
were to follow him, and took them through the doors that were labeled ‘Potion
Room’. Once entering, they saw about fifteen beds lined up against the wall.
The left wall was covered from left to right with dressers, and on the
dressers, potions.
“Take what you need from the potions and
clothing, and when done, lie in bed,” ordered the guard. “I’ll be back for you
after the second round.”
Vill chose a dresser that was near the
middle of the wall; on it were about twenty flasks of numerous potions. Behind
each potion was a label. Vill looked at all of them: some were sleep and energy
potions; others were potions that allowed you to see the matches in your head,
and some were potions that healed your wounds. Vill took a flask filled with
blue liquid that was labeled ‘Sleep Tonic’. He drunk it with one gulp and put
the flask away. He suddenly felt drowsy and exhausted. He lay down on his bed
that was just across from the dresser. Once he touched the bed, he fell asleep.
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